Responses to the rough cut

The comments were divided into two sections:

Strengths

good editing
video layout was good (colours are bright)
good body language from characters in the video
effects were just right -suited the genre
good performance
nice use of colours
good camera angles and shots
good effects
good angles of the band playing
nice colours in background

Weaknesses

too many similar shots-drags a little bit
drags a little
rather repetitive
rando girl doesnt really fit
random shots
where is the bass?
the girl and boy seem a bit random

overall these comments are hard to direct our improvements towards, we already thought the cut away scenes were abit of a gamble, as we mainly used them to cover up the introduction of the harmonica. we need to think carefuly about how we can relate the cut aways to the music and make the whole song fit. the next step is to get advice from an expert.

Natalie Palmer